Cover work

In the lesson that our teacher wasn't in we had to mark another persons essay that has the same target grade as you in the class and write 5 EBI's and 5 WWW's on there essay and they had to do the same for yours. This was very effective because I got a lot of good feedback from Donna and she got some very good feedback from me. This will really help me next time I do an essay because she helped me to see the good and bad points on my essay, that I couldn't see. Then we also had home work on doing a brain storm on what we know on thrillers.